ext_97778 ([identity profile] jakia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] timepiececlock 2006-06-29 04:43 am (UTC)

Think this works as a replacement?

"--You told me just yesterday you wouldn’t go even if they made you. Why the change of heart?”

He shrugged lightly at her. “What about you? You’ve talked about nothing else for more than a week, and now that I’m offering to take you you don’t want to go? I find that hard to believe.”

She glared at him. “I don’t want to go, Zuko.”
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(was that part about frothing the only bit you had a problem with? Not any of the other stuff?)

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