ext_97876 ([identity profile] yukihada.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] timepiececlock 2008-10-18 02:50 pm (UTC)

I like the idea. You should write it. I think what I particularly like about it is the spirit world kiss on the eye. It reminds me of the beginning of the Snow Queen. --A piece of glass gets into Kay's eyes. He disappears with the Snow Queen because his sense of right/wrong/beautiful and ugly have been altered and Gerda goes off to rescue him.

I see great potential. And the only way to write an epic is a small piece at a time. So don't think whole thing. Think chapter one.

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