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timepiececlock ([personal profile] timepiececlock) wrote2008-07-23 03:35 pm
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ATLA fanfic drabbles: I'm not above wish-fullfillment, so hit me with your best shot.

Give me a character or pairing and one prompt for what you wanted from the Avatar: The Last Airbender finale but didn't get to see.


For anyone who follows Doctor Who: I've this desire now to turn these drabble requests into something like "Five Things That Happened In The Avatar Finale, In Pete's World."

[identity profile] hecatehatesthat.livejournal.com 2008-07-23 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Toph rescuing Sokka's meteor sword!
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probably not what you were expecting, but enjoy!

[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-23 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Gray Sky Morning

In the shadows of morning twilight, in that hush just before the hour of providence, the great, silver bay of Shai Dan is slipping away. As the water recedes the remnants of its form trail after it, pooling in shallow crags and running in rivulets like the curling hair of a sleeping goddess.

Two birds swerve and glide in the air above, long-winged and gray as the sky that holds them high. One lands, hoppity and curious, on an outcropped shape in black, scorched rocks above the waterline. The blackness stretches for miles back from the shore, a pall on a coastline once revered for its lush, verdant landscape. The bird, impatient and hungry, stabs at the narrow shape it's rested on with its beak. Under the dirt something glistens, and with a squawk the second bird lands on the shape as well, opposite the first. It raises its wings, hisses, and gulps at the sea air until its speckled throat expands to tripled size.

Neither bird sees the third shape moving slowly across the rocks, or feels the way that sooty pebble and blackened stone sink softly under the figure's feet only to rise again when the weight has passed. They are still bickering in lilting chirps and swollen feathers when voice says:

"Scram! You better not have pooped on that thing. Stupid birds."

A few pebbles spiral up around the tall perch, and the gray birds launch into the air, cursing and raging at the interloper with all the menace their cawing voices are capable of. The figure, now visible as a child wrapped in dark robes, spits on each hand them brings them together one sharp, ringing clap.

"Hiya, Space Sword. Someone's been missing you."

Smiling with teeth white as pearl in the new dawn light, she pulls the sword from the stone.

Re: probably not what you were expecting, but enjoy!

[identity profile] jade-sabre-301.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
love love love the last line (obviously). and the very visual/...uh, cinematic? yeah that's the word, nature--it starts out with the wide pan, zooms in, enter Toph, Toph perform awesome, cut. very well done. :-)

better than what I expected!

[identity profile] hecatehatesthat.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
Toph is such a badass, I love that last line! And that she erases her tracks as she goes. What a girl!

I like the atmosphere you got with the pov, too. Totally fuckin' rad.

[identity profile] misora.livejournal.com 2008-07-23 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Aang: sacrifice. :/
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-23 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh wicked.
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[identity profile] boosette.livejournal.com 2008-07-23 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Iroh; Taking over the Earth Kingdom one tea shop at a time ('a jasmine dragon on every corner')

(or: Ursa; prodigal mother)

[identity profile] hex-the-ex.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, I have to say I love that. And get flashes of colaboration with the evil Starbucks empire, since their having to close hundreds of stores, someone has to move in on that market....

And my drabble suggestion are: a) Where exactly were the other kids and Papa during this battle after they escaped from the Air Temple?
or b) some bloodbending from Team Zutara.

[identity profile] manonlechat.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
Zuko/Katara; maybe someday?

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 06:19 am (UTC)(link)
Zuko telling Mai that he couldn't marry her because of her political views.

And/or

Toph dying because of Aang, and getting called on it.
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 06:30 am (UTC)(link)
Toph: *in spirit world*
Toph: Sure is pretty here...
God: You think so? Thanks for noticing!
Toph: ...
God: *screams* THAT'S NOT FUNNY!

Angel That Looks Like Koh's Original Face: Telephone call for a Toph Be Fong the First? Toph Bei Fong the First?
Toph: Give i' here.
ATLLKOF: Ma'am.
Toph: *to phone* Hello?
Aang: Toph?
Toph: In the ethereal.
Aang: Oh Toph, I'M SO SORRRRRRY! CAN YOU PLEASE FORGIVE ME?
Toph: No. Forgiveness is the same as doing nothing. And I'm doing a lot of nothing these days, SEEING AS I'M DEAD!
Aang: Toph, I---
Toph: GO PISS IN THE OCEAN AND SWIM! *hangs up*
Toph: Wow, I feel better now.
God: It's the chain of screaming.
Toph: You sure it's not a circle?
God: It's a chain!




.. I'll write you a real one later!

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 06:36 am (UTC)(link)
Ha! This one was lol-tastic though.

And do you mind if I gack this?
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 06:37 am (UTC)(link)
the conversation or the meme? EIther is fine.

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 07:19 am (UTC)(link)
gacking the meme. I am all for fanfic fixing canon.
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-24 06:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks to your grammar mistake, this amusing little omake popped into my head. I did run into some problems with messing Asian underworlds with judeo-Christian heaven concepts, but not like Toph would be able to see what the place looked like anyway,

[identity profile] gojira007.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Zuko. Katara. The trip back from confronting the ex-leader of the Southern Raiders. Pweeze? :D

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 07:20 am (UTC)(link)
Great icon. Where did you get it?

[identity profile] gojira007.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
LJ user avatar_fan posted it; I found the page it was on by googling "Zutara icons", I believe. ^_^

[identity profile] gojira007.livejournal.com 2008-07-30 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome. :D

[identity profile] clara-destine.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oooooh, good one. Makes me want to take a crack at it myself!

[identity profile] gojira007.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I'd love to see that! :D
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-26 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
have at it!

[identity profile] mshepnj.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I HAS IDEAS. LOTS OF 'EM.

Pairing - Zutara

Prompt 1- What Zuko is thinking as he watches Katara bloodbend the commander, and/or when he watches her bend the rain.

Prompt 2 - (Zutara + Azula) What happens immediately after the Agni Kai and Azula's awesome break down.

The other idea:

Zuko and Ozai - What was Ozai's response to Zuko question: "Where is my mother?"




[identity profile] gojira007.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Mind if I took a crack at that last one? :D

[identity profile] jade-sabre-301.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
dude I feel like dragging this meme over to katara_zuko. Maybe next week when I'm not working as much and have time to drabble. *plots*
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[identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
DO IT DO IT.