Thank you for your kind thoughts! I don't want to rewrite it either,but it was written on a lark, not as something that could workably be continued, despite my efforts. I might get away with rewriting little details later... like upping Sakura's age a year or two. Having her be 16 was fine for a fantasy but if they're ever going to go anywhere, I would need her to be older than that before I write it.
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Date: 2007-08-27 02:47 pm (UTC)