Totally caught the depresso- feeling, nicely set the mood.
Yup, you wrote that cool sentence. I know I didn't put it there and if you didn't put it there, I'd say you have fic elves adding sentences while you're away.
It took no effort to stride toward the drowning vampire prince-not a king, no never that-to pull him up with a kiss and sink into his mouth, into his love.
I like that line. I wrote part of this fic jsut because I desperately desperately wanted to call Spike a "vampire prince" in at least one fanfic of mine, somewhere. I had this whole mental logical reasoning behind calling him that, talking about how his behavior as a master vampire is very reminiscent of stories of the restless prince who spurns his king's control yet desires his acceptance and pride (Angelus), who wastes his time with unimportant selfish and overly romanticized lifestyle, but who nonetheless is the one who will one day inheret all that power and prestige of his family...
Oooh, neatness. I like that. That's so Spike. I like that a lot. Coolness.
Also, *shocked and awed* you didn't use the word "rain" at all. I actually went back and reread 3 times just to look for "rain" because I could have sworn rain was mentioned. You're good!
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Date: 2003-05-04 11:30 am (UTC)Yup, you wrote that cool sentence. I know I didn't put it there and if you didn't put it there, I'd say you have fic elves adding sentences while you're away.
It took no effort to stride toward the drowning vampire prince-not a king, no never that-to pull him up with a kiss and sink into his mouth, into his love.
I like that line. I wrote part of this fic jsut because I desperately desperately wanted to call Spike a "vampire prince" in at least one fanfic of mine, somewhere. I had this whole mental logical reasoning behind calling him that, talking about how his behavior as a master vampire is very reminiscent of stories of the restless prince who spurns his king's control yet desires his acceptance and pride (Angelus), who wastes his time with unimportant selfish and overly romanticized lifestyle, but who nonetheless is the one who will one day inheret all that power and prestige of his family...
Oooh, neatness. I like that. That's so Spike. I like that a lot. Coolness.
Also, *shocked and awed* you didn't use the word "rain" at all. I actually went back and reread 3 times just to look for "rain" because I could have sworn rain was mentioned. You're good!