Two little caveats before I begin; I have only studied Socialogy to A-level (thats somewhere between high-school and degree level), and of course I have no experince of day to day living in America.
I like your style, although there is an argument to made that it was rather closer to a journalistic or article-esque (forgive my bad habbit of making up words...I have been up since 4am today), rather than accademic. But then again accademic style is dry, blaand and often a joyless read, which this certainly is not! Howver should there not be more socialogical theory in it?
By the by, a pointless fact about British gender equality, that while a Woman held the highest (elected) executive posistion is this country, the amount of women in other top jobs declined!. In fact some areas of employment in Britain have apparently now more male Dominated than they where when Margret THatcher came to power...I thinbk she might have put peope off Female leaders..
I am still going to campaign for you to run for President, Rashaka!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
On the subject of the essay
Date: 2002-12-14 03:44 am (UTC)Two little caveats before I begin; I have only studied Socialogy to A-level (thats somewhere between high-school and degree level), and of course I have no experince of day to day living in America.
I like your style, although there is an argument to made that it was rather closer to a journalistic or article-esque (forgive my bad habbit of making up words...I have been up since 4am today), rather than accademic. But then again accademic style is dry, blaand and often a joyless read, which this certainly is not! Howver should there not be more socialogical theory in it?
By the by, a pointless fact about British gender equality, that while a Woman held the highest (elected) executive posistion is this country, the amount of women in other top jobs declined!. In fact some areas of employment in Britain have apparently now more male Dominated than they where when Margret THatcher came to power...I thinbk she might have put peope off Female leaders..
I am still going to campaign for you to run for President, Rashaka!