Hmm... just want to add one thing... please don't use the 'it was only a dream' plot device for the ending.
That plot device is probably my most hatest of all. Makes me want to tear my hair out.
Then again... if you're after sheer annoyance... yah... that plot device will most likely get me incredibly peeved with the author, unless he or she is someone like Mark Twain.
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Date: 2006-05-01 08:35 am (UTC)That plot device is probably my most hatest of all. Makes me want to tear my hair out.
Then again... if you're after sheer annoyance... yah... that plot device will most likely get me incredibly peeved with the author, unless he or she is someone like Mark Twain.