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jade_sabre_301:
Give me one of my own stories, and a timestamp sometime in the future after the end of the story, or sometime in the past before the story started, and I'll write you at least a hundred words of what happened then, whether it's five minutes before the story started or ten years in the future.
Give me one of my own stories, and a timestamp sometime in the future after the end of the story, or sometime in the past before the story started, and I'll write you at least a hundred words of what happened then, whether it's five minutes before the story started or ten years in the future.
Re: YOU EVIL FUCKING PERSON, DO YOU KNOW THE RAMIFICATIONS?
Date: 2008-06-08 08:03 am (UTC)Seriously, if it was possible to tongue-kiss someone over the interwebs, I'd be doing that right now.
Re: YOU EVIL FUCKING PERSON, DO YOU KNOW THE RAMIFICATIONS?
Date: 2008-06-08 08:13 am (UTC)Re: YOU EVIL FUCKING PERSON, DO YOU KNOW THE RAMIFICATIONS?
Date: 2008-06-09 05:01 am (UTC)You do realize
Date: 2008-06-08 08:37 am (UTC)2) I have no idea where to go with the story thematically-- suggestions welcome!
3) I'll probably have to name it "That Bright Imperious Line" or something.
Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-08 09:00 am (UTC)Zuko came to teach Aang and is totally committed to that. At first Katara's awkward, but once she realizes that Zuko's not, her awkwardness turns into frustration. He's ignoring her. Indifferent to her. Acting like it never happened, and that drives Katara batshit. How can she pick a fight with him and yell at him and control the situation if he's going to ignore the situation?
Instead of being smart and realizing Zuko's right to shove those feelings and personal issues to the side until the war is over, Katara becomes determined to crack his facade and find out if he really has moved on or not.
Hm...not sure if I like it. How does that gel with the other characters at the WAT? With Aang? Especially since Katara now knows how Aang feels about her.
Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-08 09:02 am (UTC)If ZUko introduces himself pretty much the same way, what about Katara's behavior should be different from the episode? She still doesn't trust him of course, but what should change in that scene?
"Um, hi."
He drops from the hanging vine; like a school of fish they fling themselves around with hands up and mouths gawping. He lets himself look at Katara, just once, and he knows.
She never told.
Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-09 04:59 am (UTC)Have you heard 'What would happen if we kissed'?
Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-09 05:00 am (UTC)Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-09 11:41 am (UTC)http://www.sendspace.com/file/xhrj23
Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-09 06:30 pm (UTC)Re: You do realize
Date: 2008-06-09 11:32 pm (UTC)