Only thing that makes me nuts in fanfic is when people start their story in the first person perspective and end in the third, (or 3rd to 1st), without any real "break" or reason for the change in tone... just, you know, midway through a sentence alter the perspective. Grr... (I don't mind when they have multiple first person narratives in one story, but if you start out in first person, stick with it!)
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Date: 2003-12-26 10:09 am (UTC)