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[timepiececlock]

Well, I posted chapter 6 of my Fruits Basket WIP, Mon Autre Vie. This is the first chapter that doesn't center on Tohru, and I hope I handled Hiro's characterization decently. I had better; he's eventually going to carry almost a third of the story. Naturally, this makes me nervous.

But the chapter is pretty good, I think. If nothing else it starts to give readers a peek into what's really going on. Not the whole thing, of course, but a peek.

I'd also like to point out to the general world that this is my *sixth* chapter, and the farthest by far that I've ever taken a WIP before. And at over 1000 words almost double any other chapter yet. Bully for me. Here's hoping I take it a lot father. If nothing else because most FB fic is so abismally bad even that even if this is disappointing at least you'll know that I can use a comma properly.

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[rashaka.livejournal.com]

Oh, and I did want to thank you for the review. It made me smile to know that you were reading. And I definitely, definitely, will be doing more. I feel it: this is the chapter fic I will complete.

[crossouttheeyes.livejournal.com]

Of course I'm reading. It's even on the iPod to reread at work.

this is the chapter fic I will complete.

Or Psycho will repeatedly poke you until you are driven insane.